http://seva-g.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] seva-g.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] l_u 2006-03-05 09:17 am (UTC)

хорошее, наверно. много неожиданного(поражающего мое детское воображение!)!
Но вот чепушинку бы поправил: "как ты сжимаешь моЕ горло ночью". ИМХО.

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