Date: 2006-04-23 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karial.livejournal.com
замечательная зарисовка, тонкие оттенки, детали
чуть-чуть грубовата предпоследняя строка, простовата как-то..равно как и "от тоски уморились"
зато последний аккорд хороший
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